Story Writing : Fairy Tale : Goldilocks
Once upon a time there was a girl, her name was Goldilocks. She was running in the forest and lost her way back home. She saw a little cottage, she nocked on the door but nobody answered. So she went inside and saw three bowls full of soup. She tried the first one and it was too hot, she tried the ____ it was too cold, she tried third one, it was just right. She ate it all up.
She saw three chairs
She sat on the first one, it was too hard, she sat on the second one, it was too soft, she sat on the third one, it was just right but it broke down. So she went upstairs and saw three beds. She tried all the three beds but she liked the baby bear's bed the best. She slept on it until the bear family came back. When the baby bear came for a rest, he saw a little girl in his bed.
He growled at her, she got scared and ran away as fast as she could.
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She saw three chairs
She sat on the first one, it was too hard, she sat on the second one, it was too soft, she sat on the third one, it was just right but it broke down. So she went upstairs and saw three beds. She tried all the three beds but she liked the baby bear's bed the best. She slept on it until the bear family came back. When the baby bear came for a rest, he saw a little girl in his bed.
He growled at her, she got scared and ran away as fast as she could.
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