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Story Writing : Caillou the builder

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One day Caillou was helping his mommy in making lunch. His daddy and his grandpa were going to build a house. Caillou said "Can I help?" daddy said "okay!" when they reached there he met a thin boy, his name was Franky. Franky said "this is going to be my new house". They were running around the house, when mommy came with the lunch. Caillou started eating jelly sandwitch but daddy said "wash your hands first". Everyone enjoyed the lunch. Later Franky's family thanked Caillou's family for helping them.     Original write-up : page 1     Original write-up : page 2      Original write-up : page 3  

Story Writing : Fairy Tale : Goldilocks

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Once upon a time there was a girl, her name was Goldilocks. She was running in the forest and lost her way back home. She saw a little cottage, she nocked on the door but nobody answered. So she went inside and saw three bowls full of soup. She tried the first one and it was too hot, she tried the ____ it was too cold, she tried third one, it was just right. She ate it all up. She saw three chairs She sat on the first one, it was too hard, she sat on the second one, it was too soft, she sat on the third one, it was just right but it broke down. So she went upstairs and saw three beds. She tried all the three beds but she liked the baby bear's bed the best. She slept on it until the bear family came back. When the baby bear came for a rest, he saw a little girl in his bed. He growled at her, she got scared and ran away as fast as she could.     Original write-up : page 1       Original write-up : page 2       Original write-up : p...

Story Writing : mice menace

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One day I saw some mice running around the house. I told my mother about them. She said 'Where!!' I told her that they are jumping in the pram. She went into the kitchen and took out some wheat flour from a box. Then she made some balls and put them around the house. I asked mother "why are we putting the balls?". She said "you will see". Next morning, I saw four dead mice. Oh Bother ! What a job.     Original write-up : page 1       Original write-up : page 2   

Story Writing : Spider

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One day I was walking down the street with my mommy. On the way I saw a spider. It was spinning a web. I stopped and looked at it. Suddenly I remembered that I have to go to the post-office to buy a stamp for my letter. I still think about the hard working spider.     Original write-up