My family

My Mom

My mom takes good care of me.

My mom dress me up for school.
She picks me up from scool and takes me to the park.
She makes food for me.
She helps me in reading and writing.
I love my mommy.


My Dad

My Dad is a good man.
He gives me a shower on weekends.
He took me to the disneyland
My Dad took me to toastmaster.
He reads me a Bedtime story.
I love my Dad.


My Grandparents

I was born at my Grandparent's house.
They visit me every year.
She makes pickle and sweets for me.
They tell me stories.
I love them.




    The original writeup pages (with the comments from my teacher)


    Dadi (granny) and I having fun in my room

Comments

  1. AditiSunday, November 13, 2011

    WOW! Very good Tarang!! you're a really good writer! I like the paragraph about chacha the most :DD -aditi didi

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  2. SudhakarSunday, November 13, 2011

    It's an excellent beginning. For the present, I would only encourage you to read more and enjoy simple writing.Keep it up!!

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  3. PavithraFriday, December 09, 2011

    Its a wonderful write-up Tarang. Loved reading about your Mom, Dad and Granparents. Do share some fun things you and Neel did.

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